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Sorry for the late reply. I haven't been on because I've just been so busy! You know how it is, die on the pavement then you don't want to get ...

D-Dog/Rae/Rae-Dog! It is I, the great and wonderful Apple! I've come to review your work. As I am the coolest most raddest person of all time...you know what I'm saying? ...

Heya Emily! I do want to review this but with how big it is, I feel kind of intimidated. Maybe instead of placeing the two chapters together, you seperate them ...

I just want to mention, I love your avvie. It's so funny! I was practically toppling out of my chair. But anyway, back to the review! My name is Apple, ...

Hey Wicked! Thought I'd come and do a 'lil reviewing! Anyway I'll start off with the things I didn't like. I know that 'you' was a wanted thing with this, ...

What is this? Are you like some poet or something because this was great! I mean you may have actually changed my opinion on poetry from being the lame thing ...

So I ignored what you said in the spoiler, but I want to dissagree with you! I can understand this perfectly...What are you talking about? :lol: You have real talent! ...

I'm just going to mention something to you. This seems very interesting, but you have written way to much. I mean as a reviewer I am getting dizzy at the ...

It's short, rather short. You cannot really say much with a short post. If you're low on time then save it using the button below and then return to it. ...

Wow! This was really good. It sounds a little bit like Eragon, though. But that may just be the start. It will, and I know it will, straighten to be ...

This thing is as big as Mount Everest! I'm gonna have to pull on my hiking boots if I'm to start reviewing. Also, just cause you're the first person, nice ...

One thing that I think is a little shifty, the way you set it up. It's just to cluttered. I know this is how you're supposed to set it up ...

This was actually very enjoyable! And for someone as myself to say that about poetry, you've got to be darn good at what you're doing. Starting a poem the way ...

I'm not to good with poetry so this will be a small review, but I just want to comment on how deep this came across. And it's weird for me ...

Well I cannot really correct anything because everyone beat me to it! *Shakes hand furiously at previous reviewers* But I can tell you what I think of it! Like I ...