AntonioRivera

Thanks for liking it! And she will be revealed when I add more! :)

I told you I'd read your other work, so I did. Though this one was a little scattered, you have the most important tool in the writing world. Your style. ...

Hey, I want to read this, but the print hurts my eyes and there are no indents! :(

Well thank you for your thoughts! I'll add on more soon!

I did a lot of polishing haha :] thanks for the review; I haven't actually written the next part yet, but I'm doing that now :)

Hey man, this helped immensely! It really pointed out exact things, instead of being broad. Thank you very very much; now I know what to work on exactly! You'll see ...

Thanks for the review! Now that I look at it, the paragraphs are really long; I'll break those up! And I'll work on it since it's a draft. Good suggestions!

Thank you for being open and understanding the feeling. I hope you're able to use it in the future to better yourself. Thanks for reading!

Thanks for the review! I actually entered this in a poetry contest and got third place, so that is why I asked you to read it. I see your suggestions ...

Thank your for sharing that bit of personal experience, and thanks for your thoughts!

Well thank your for the review! I am new here, but not at all new to writing and I've experimented in many different styles. One being the base method which ...

Thanks for the review! As always, I will take your suggestions into consideration. At the end, when you mention the lovers and how that part is the heart of the ...

Thank you! Depression is something that entangles us all, so it is helpful to try to make something good of it and not look at it as a life ending ...

Thank you for criticizing my work! I never get disappointed when people state their opinions; in fact I love it. Just by your suggestions, I feel connected with you as ...

Thank you for your suggestions; as always, I take them into consideration because they help! Thanks for reading!