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I like it but if there lines were even it would have a better flow::). Other than that you did pretty good I like this part of your poem "Oh ...

This introduction is just right to me>) I find it very interesting from start to finish. I like the way you described the character and how he handled himself. It's ...

This poem is really interesting, No matter what you do there's always something you can think of to stop you from doing so.) well i enjoyed reading this poem... you ...

Wow this poem is very beautiful. I just can't find anything wrong with it lol. Your choice of words are felt, the emotion and feeling of overcoming with all your ...

Wow i love your choice of words, it helps me pick the image in my head much faster "I am a gentle breeze. Not swift like you, but moving on, ...

Hmm I agree with the previous comment, kinda reminds me of one my styles! "Then they all get mad at me they put their hands in my face I cry ...

I find this very amusing! "I reflect on the nightmare that had come to haunt me these past few months. It always starts in a dark alley next to a ...

I find this piece brilliant, I love the way you made the story flow from the beginning to the end. Marvelous and it would be cool if you wrote more. ...

Really good I must say, I like how you started and explaining the character train of thought. It flow very nice, maybe some metaphors and more vocabulary would make this ...