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Is this the last chapter?
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Re: Daylee's Dating Licensing
Excellent post! I found it both informative and easy to read. The explanations were clear, and the insights were extremely helpful. I also explored a useful resource here : detailed ...
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Re: Dear younger brother
capybara clicker is a fun idle clicking game centered around the adorable capybara.
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Re: Museum of Becoming
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Sep 15
Hi! I really enjoyed reading your poetry. Your words create such strong emotions, but I felt they could become even more powerful with visuals. I’m a freelance artist with 3 ... -
Re: Rejection
Hi! Just want to say that I love your poem. It accurately describes a universal fear everyone goes through while also integrating your own experience. One of the lines that ...
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Re: The Illusion I Had Of Freedom
This is a great poem and deals with the struggle we have in every day life to get to where we want so we can be free. Very well articulated. ...
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Re: .
Can't wait for more! You did a really good job with all the suspense. Seriously, your writing is rly good.
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Re: .
Is this it or are you writing more? The other chapters are longer than this so I just wanted to know.
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Re: .
I love your writing! I looked back at my own writing a while ago and I realized that it need a bit of improvement. Could you please give me some ...
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Re: The notes you never got
Amazing. There is so much potential there are just a couple spelling mistakes. Keep it up!
Sep 6 -
Re: Where I'm From: To Mom
I really enjoyed how this poem turns small everyday memories into something warm and personal, especially the parts about family traditions, old records, and memories connected to home. It reminded ...
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Re: I Can't Write Haikus
this made me laugh because the whole poem is basically saying “i can’t write haikus” while somehow still managing to write one i like how simple and self-aware it is, ...
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Re: how do you hold the weight of the world?
this poem really stayed with me — the mix of sadness, pressure, and the feeling of carrying more than you can handle comes through so strongly. i also liked the ...
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Re: these hands of mine
What a powerful and poignant poem. The imagery of trying to "unburn the fire" and reconstitute what's lost is incredibly vivid and relatable, especially that feeling of wishing we could ...
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Re: .
Damn. Your story is really good. It's like I can really feel what your character's are feeling. I wish I could write an emotionally as your writing.
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