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I appreciated the vibe you created from the start. The unhurried trek throughout Larkspur, the creaking stairs, and Valerian's observation of every shadow quickly produced a sense of suspense. It ...

Thank you, @youngdreamer, for noticing the repetition and diction. These were probably the two aspects I revised the most, so I'm glad they came thru. Also, "jarry breath" was my ...

Pretty cool story, sort of reminds me of the short horror film called Under The Bed. :)

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I was browsing the literary categories on the Young Writers Society site and couldn't help but laugh when I saw 'Chickens' listed right alongside genres like Action/Adventure and Fantasy. I'm ...

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The genre list here is wild—"Action/Adventure" right next to "Chickens" made me do a double take. I also appreciate that the Green Room and roleplay forums are front and center; ...

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The part about how "Fanfiction" and "Roleplays" got grouped under the same literary category really stood out—I’d never thought about how those formats actually share that collaborative, improvisa

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The mention of Chickens in the genre list completely threw me—especially alongside “Dramatic” and “Fanfiction”—but now I’m curious how they’re integrating poultry into serious storytel

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I was browsing the Culture section of the Young Writers Society directory and couldn't help but chuckle at the tags. Seeing "Chickens" listed right next to "Action/Adventure" and "Fantasy" is ...

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I love that the Young Writers Society has such a diverse range of categories, but I honestly did a double-take seeing 'Chickens' listed right next to Action/Adventure and Fantasy. I'm ...

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I was browsing the literary categories on the Young Writers Society site and couldn't help but laugh when I saw 'Chickens' listed right next to Action/Adventure and Fantasy. I originally ...

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I was browsing the Literary culture section on the Young Writers Society page and couldn't help but chuckle at the tags. I'm genuinely curious about what kind of creative pieces ...

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I'm definitely gearing up for the Review Day starting tomorrow, but I have to admit I did a double-take at the categories listed. Seeing 'Chickens' right next to 'Action / ...

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I can't believe Review Day is starting in just one day already, so I need to get my reading list ready! I was looking through the literary categories and cracked ...

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I'm getting ready for Review Day starting tomorrow, but I honestly got distracted by the categories list. Seeing 'Chickens' right next to Action/Adventure and Dramatic prose is pretty hilarious. I ...

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Your verses burn from ashes, mourning homes and loves that should not die—a genesis of grief, rebuilding timber, body, and memory from dust and flame. pips