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Re: Exploring universe and me
Hi AlexWrites! I see you've written about the bittersweetness of growing up, something that we all relate to atleast at one point of our lives. The first stanza feels youthful, ...
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Re: The Folly of Man
Reminds me of the current political situation all over the world. Truly, everyone is at a war, certain or uncertain and in each of those wars are the folly of ...
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Re: "Oranges"
Hi!! This is a really beautiful piece!! Here's my personal interpretation of some of these lines of you would like to know: "Eyes yearn like a puppy with no owner ...
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Re: i live encased in glass
I don't generally write reviews but this one genuinely did something to my heart. It's so heartbreakingly beautiful I was left at a loss of words. To be honest, I ...
Apr 1 -
Re: gentle parenting the self
This is a fairly interesting and unique work. I see it talks about the complexities of even a mundane life. I like the sentences in the parenthesis and how they ...
Apr 1 -
Re: Drums of Duty
Honestly, I don't really know much about poetry from a technical standpoint so it's not exactly my place to exactly critique your work but I will tell you what kind ...
Apr 1 -
Re: left me cold and dead [i wanted you to be better]
I haven't read poetry in a while and I have to tell you this poem has a really strong imagery because it was like witnessing every single frame of a ...
Apr 1
