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Re: Why?
Suppper intenseee!!! You sent this to me in a text once I think. Okayy! It's kinda sad :'(. Imagine me blinking away the tears. I really do like this poem ...
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: She's such a Drama Queen Prologue
Ohh, wow. That was a great attention grabber! I realize this is just the prologue so I'll save the questions for the real chapters! So far great jobb!! --Anne
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: I Still Have Hope...
I love the emotion in this! I agree with eveyone else! This poem is amazing! I'm going to have to read your other stuff! --Anne
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: What I've Always Known
Sorry the color I used didn't work. I really did love your story though! and I can't wait to read what you are gonna do next!
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: Myself And Time
I loved this. It defines emotions most people want to feel. I really like this!
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: Abracadabra (Edited)
Wow, I really enjoyed this. I smiled to myself at parts. Great job!! :)
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: Heart of Stone<3
Thank you all for the constructive criticism!! I will fix everything and hope that it makes more since :)
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: Forget Me Not
This sounds very interesting!! I would love to hear more. The only thing I can say is you should write more! That was amazing. But where is she going? And ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: Heart of Stone<3
Thank you. What part did you get confused on? I was just making that up as I was going to it has a ton of flaws. :)
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: Anguish
I felt like you talking directly to me. That was amazing. I can't tell you how many times I have felt that way. You summed everything up in an amazing ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: He Might Need New Shoes
I don't really know the characters but Henry seems like he really loves her and why is she saying no? I agree with grammar changes. I liked the idea but ...
Jul 30, 2010