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Re: Mike Fyler Ch. 2-3
Oh my gosh! I had chills. This was amazing! I literaly could not find anything wrong with it! You are an amazing writer. I read the first part of this ...
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Re: What I've Always Known
Hey there!! I'm gonna try my hardest to give you helpful comments! I never thought that love could sneak up on you so fast and suck you in. I wasn't ...
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Re: I love you
Oh wow, the emotions in this story were mind-boggling. You took the reader through many differnet levels of emotions. Your story decribed the feelings that most people wish to feel ...
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: A Walk to Remember
I like cheesy, sometimes it's just what people need! I liked your story, just because even if she didn't figure out how the boy felt, she still had that one ...
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: My Falling Sun 8
Ohh wow, that was amazing. I read My Falling Sun 7. I'm assuming there is more I missed and I will have to go back and read. But so far ...
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: Deleted Topic.
I really liked this and I can't wait to read more. I can personally relate to this story. All of my best friends have ditched me for their 'reputations'. I ...
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: drama i guess
Wow, I didn't expect that. There were a few gramar problems here and there but I am horrible at grammar so what do I know? I did love the thought ...
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: romance fiction
Over all this was a very good plot. I don't quite understand why she kissed him when she just met him... but maybe I'm missing something. I can't really complain ...
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: Mike Fyler
Uh, all I can say is wow. I absolutely enjoyed that. There was so much thought and details behind this. I loved it. I would reallllly like to read more. ...
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: Bikes and Books - Chapter One
Wow, I usually don't like guy point of views but I really enjoyed this. He wasn't small minded like most guys. He actually put thought behind his actions. I think ...
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: Forgive and Forget
This poem is very truthful and straight to the point. That's what this world needs more of these days. I am not going to lecture you about spelling and punctuation ...
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: My Falling Sun 7
I thought the idea was amazing. I felt like I was there. I will admit the part about Jenny was odd but if she were to come back it would ...
Jul 30, 2010
