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Re: Serrated
Here's my review I liked the way you portrayed death from a lover's point of view. It seems almost as if you speak from experience in this poem. The description ...
Dec 16, 2016 -
Re: Say hello to goodbye
A review from me. I am guessing that this is about a breakup between a girl and a guy. If I'm wrong please correct me. I thought you did a ...
Dec 15, 2016 -
Re: Lines in the Sand
A review from me. This hit hard. It was well written and it got the point across. I like how you wrote this. The part that hit me the hardest ...
Dec 15, 2016 -
Re: Series of Color: Black
Hey, here's a review. The only thing I saw wrong was when you wrote ""Black." She mumbled under her breath" I think that you should've made it "Black," she mumble. ...
Dec 15, 2016 -
Re: Baby Love Me
Hello, here's a review. I'm not a poet. I say that every time I review poetry. It's because I'm not and I don't want offend anyone. I liked the love ...
Dec 13, 2016 -
Re: butterfly knot.
Review I'm not a poet. Sorry in advance if I seem to know nothing of the subject because I know very little. It was a great piece of art. I ...
Dec 13, 2016 -
Re: Europa's Third Law
Some review from a newbie. Hey! I personally believe it was good. I might be wrong however, because I really love futuristic world-ending type stories. I don't have anything negative ...
Dec 13, 2016 -
Re: Where am I?
Here's some review for you. Okay, it's a great story. There were a few errors, though. "I lie there a thick substance grasping at my arm" I feel like this ...
Dec 13, 2016
