Angrynoodles

Thank you so much!! I need more people to be brutally honest. I need to use there tips to edit the other half dozen fight scenes in the book haha

........................................................ I- uh- well... how do I even respond to what I just read. That was pretty friggin' hilarious.

Thanks, I need to back and read the whole second draft over... all 70 words 0_0. That way I can catch all those little mistakes. I mean to have it ...

Great Job!

Nice, I would love to review this.... buuuuuuuuut I am really hungry and I have a bunch of homework. But I will be back for a review sometime!!

Maybe my school are messed up because it takes a 65 or above to pass. Also teachers talk to us like we're garbage. Lol thanks though

Haha I do remember telling people that I used to live in Japan but it was awhile ago So I did not recognize your username. *bows* Sayounara

Sorry, I meant that you should still separate it because the subject changes. It goes from Will asking to be let in to Max ignoring and swallowing. Of course if ...

Haha, well it's good to know somebody enjoys them

Alright, then it is good to have it that way. Sorry about the spelling errors in my review, I am on my phone and it is a little difficult to ...

Haha I could look into continuing it. I might just start up a new series though. Thanks!

I will go over it again and correct the mistakes. Haha Dr. Evil, like Tom raises his pinky to his mouth. Thank you so much for reading all of them.

Thanks, I look forward to see how you react to the ending!

Haha you're back. I actually just uploaded the last bit. The ending is very surprising. And Henry died while Noah was on the lower floor, Tom just did not realize ...

Thanks I will take that into account