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Re: 12/20/15
Hi! Because we're both visiting family in different states I haven't been able to give it to him yet and I won't see him until January 4th :/ Thank you ...
Dec 28, 2015 -
Re: 12/20/15
Thank you so much! Not gonna lie this made me tear up a little, I wrote this for my boyfriend and I was worried it wasn't good enough.
Dec 25, 2015 -
Re: Rain
Hi! Thank you so much!! Part 3- Cloudburst was just like heavy rainfall, representing how in our teens, everything is so full of passion- love, heartbreak, all that. Part 4- ...
Dec 20, 2014 -
Re: Rain
Ah! the bold font was actually an accident xD Thank you so much for your review, it means a lot to me! Yes, the capitalization was a stylistic choice :) ...
Dec 20, 2014 -
Re: Not Yet Titled
I implemented your suggestions! thank you!!
Oct 29, 2014 -
Re: Not Yet Titled
Thank you @BookWolf! :) Agh I call myself a Grammar Nazi, I can't believe I missed those freakin' commas! I wanted it to have a sort of dramatic, slam poetry ...
Oct 28, 2014 -
Re: Not Yet Titled
Thank you so much @CreepyMeow ! I was feeling a lot at the time that I wrote it, and I'm really glad that others can see that, also :)
Oct 28, 2014 -
Re: Not Yet Titled
Thank you!! :) I really appreciate it! @LiteraryAdmirer99 !
Oct 28, 2014 -
Re: Removed
I just started crying. Oh my gosh. I'm absolutely in love with this. Especially because my best friend and I are starting to drift away a bit and we don't ...
Feb 2, 2013 -
Re: Thankful For Daddy
SO GOOD. If it wasn't for the fact I'm ridiculously tired, I would be bawling.
Nov 29, 2012 -
Re: What America means to me
Thanks for reviewing! I am not very good at rhyming but I'll work on it. Constructive criticism is very important for me. Thanks again for taking the time to look ...
Sep 18, 2011 -
Re: What America means to me
First off- Thank you so much! 2nd-Noelle Thanks! I like it, too ! :D We are very lucky. I believe I am so fortunate to live in such luxury (I'm ...
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: deleted
People are always so fake these days and then you start falling into it and people are just all Barbies these days..
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Love it!
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: The Story of You and I
Thanks :) @Crimsona: At first I didn't think cadet blue was a very poetic type color and it didn't sound very pretty. My sister was the one that helped me ...
Jul 28, 2011
