AngerManagement

Hello, here as requested :D Reading this was enjoyable, I went through it rather quickly, and was very disappointed when I noticed I was at the end. Present tense is ...

In a way I kind of agree with Elinor, poetry should be subtle, you shouldn't just spell it out. You should use imagery, and fantaboulous (I know this isn't a ...

Hey Persephoneia, Seeing as your other reviewers have commented on grammar, I'll skip that bit and comment on bits like characterization, conflict etc. Opening: The man blowing his nose was ...

Although I read this multiple times, I don't think I fully understand it. It intrigues me, this story but I think I'm interpreting it differently. After some research (Wikipedia) I ...

Hi BlueShubs...I am sorry for my lateness. But I'm here so lets get on with this...I apologise if I repeat what previous reviewers might have said as I haven't read ...

Hey Blackbird, Anger here...sorry for the delay my internet is being a -censored word. I remember the last morning I awoke curled beside you— a moment encased in the ice ...

Hey Rabid-cat owner, I agree with Dreamy about a lot of things...like, for example, the continuous use of I's, and the fact that this was one of the best chapters ...

Hey Kit, Your first reviewer has made some very good points, I'll just try and add to what has already been said. I like the opening line, it's packed with ...

Hey Ching, Anger here as requested. I read the introduction to the series bit that you posted at the top of the link, and I was blown away. So...let's get ...

Hey Leth, Nitpicks “ Their They're upset now,” Heather said. “I think they want us out of here. Suddenly, I heard a think behind me. I think you mean 'thunk'.. ...

Hey Funkyreg "It's coming," She said dryly. The young woman nodded her head. Withough without another word, she turned and began to run. Her long sleeves and train fluttered out ...

Hey Shubs, Anger here as requested. “Character is a diamond which scratches all other diamonds”, were the words echoing in my mind while I sat to write this. But then ...

Hey Captian Random OMG, I’m going to crack, hopeful hopefully so does his back My friends agree, but my family don’t, try and teach you’re self yourself you dolt I ...

Hey Pink Dear my little petite leaves, You are born, but only in the spring. With glossy skin, You laugh with joy. I like the way this starts like a ...

Hey Kaywiia First I'll start with the nitpicks. I watched him ride around the neighborhood a few times. Finally, after plucking off enough grass to make a small patch of ...