Angels-Symphony

Hey Evi ^^ Shina here to do a review for you ;) I'm a bit rusty on poetry, so I checked out the rules for Hannah's contest, so I'm going ...

Hiya Bowie ^^ Shina here to do a review for you ;) An old piece of mine. Think of each paragraph as their own miniature chapters. The abruptness is intentional. ...

Hey Earth ^^ Shina just dropping by to do a quick review ;) This story has real potential :) Your description of music would definitely be your strong point. On ...

Hey, clumsy cuten whatever... you can't get mad every time someone doesn't like what you write. Sorry, Myesha, but I'm going to have to back up Captain Classy on this ...

Hey Animegirl ^^ Shina here ;) Just passing by real quick, so I'll only mention one thing: I stood in front of the mirror, brushing my pixie style hairdo, with ...

Thanks :) And you said "almost" perfect imagery. What can I do to improve it?? Always looking for constuctive critisism! xD Hey KJ! Did I tell you that whenever you ...

T-T I'm sorry for being so late, Gal. I promised a review last week, after I read it four days late... I think I avoid reviewing your poetry because I'm ...

Hey WD ^^ Shina here as promised ;) I warn you, though, that my reviews aren't as good as they should be right now xD I've had to focus on ...

LILY! I haven't talked to you a long, long, long time :P But I'm here now and I will do a review for you because I am trying to do ...

Gaaaaal. Miss eleven year old. I'm SO going to review this.../after/ I do my AP homework O____O But before I go off and take notes about the Aztecs or Islamic ...

Hey Nutty ^^ Shina here to do a review for you ;) I haven't reviewed in a while, so I might be a bit rusty. Btw, I like your title. ...

Hey Emma ^^ Shina here to do a review for you ;) I. Nitpicks His hand was clamped over her mouth, haggard face *hovering inches from hers. *Hovering doesn't feel ...

Hey Makar ^^ Shina here to do a review for you ;) I'm not going to bother nitpicking, since I can get straight to the point. Your title really caught ...

Hey Red ^^ Shina here to do a review for you ;) The poem was simple and straight to the point, but I didn't feel much for the repitition. If ...

KamaKamaKamas ^^ Shina here to do a review for you ;) I. Nitpicks Did ... past. The first line I had to reread a few times @___@ I suggest you ...