Angels-Symphony

Hey Kafkaescence! Shina here for a review (: I. Nitpicks [/b/] He said the old wilting structures spotting the riverside were cursed, and of course I could not help but ...

Hey Written ^___^ I'm Shina and I'll be your reviewer this afternoon ;) Please keep in mind that I'm critiquing this as I go, so I'll most likely ask some ...

Hey Jeanette ^^ Shina here to do a review for you ;) I really liked the idea you were going for in this poem. But I have to agree with ...

Hey Spike ^^ Shina here, on request. Please note that I haven't reviewed, really reviewed, in a while, but I'll do my best ;) I. Nitpicks So, I understand that ...

Wow, Connie xD I really enjoyed this short story. The dialogue was very believable. I liked the simplicity of it. There were a few typos in the story--a random slash ...

“Not much of a view, is it?” John turned away from the window. I don't know if you noticed, Stori, but there's something a bit off about this first sentence. ...

The generator gave you a cool idea, Earth, but personally, the pace of the story seemed slow compared to the beginning. I tired of the Magic 8-ball answering when I ...

Seeing that you haven't been thoroughly critiqued yet, I've come for a visit ;) I. Nitpicks The long dimly-lit hallway grew narrower in my mind as I walked toward a ...

At first I wasn't sure what I thought of this poem until I reached the second stanza. The last line made it make perfect sense. The only problem I had ...

Hey Shade ^^ Shina here to do a review for you ;) I. Nitpicks Listen Silence sings Like nothing else If you read this in your mind, and you read ...

Hey Brain ;) Shina here to do a review for you. I thought the beginning of this poem was pretty charming, but now onto the review. I. Nitpicks When I ...

Hey Ellie ^^ Shina here ;) I just popped on to YWS and saw you posted a poem. This poem for me had its ups and downs. Certain lines stuck ...

Hey Napal ^^ Shina here to do a review for you ;) I've been on hiatus for a while, and I just came back this morning. You haven't gotten any ...

TEAR IT APART. Beat it like there's candy in the center :D I want the candy. So bad. xD But what more can I say that hasn't been said about ...

Hey Onyx ^^ Shina here to do a review. The photo looks interesting, so let's see what you pulled out of it. I. Nitpicks What do you mean when you ...