Angelreader77

Hi! Here to review~~ I really like this poem. A lot.

Hi! Here to review~~ I like this poem. It has a nice rhythm to it, which I like. The grammar is sound, and the idea good. I like the descriptions ...

This is just ... whoa. Amazing. Absolutely amazing. This is the best thing I've ever read. :D *Reads poem again* Nitpicks- I felt the need to cause her last strife. ...

Review~~ Me like this song. Me like this song a lot . I can relate to this song,some how. I like the chorus a lot. One thing: Don’t cross the ...

Sparky! Here to review... I don't have much to say, except I like it. I don't know much about songs, see. But I lIKE this song. A lot. Don’t let ...

Hi Cookie! Review~~ I love the concept behind this poem and your choice of words It is in_ter_res_ting. Some nitpicks... People write and make things with sand, With good memories ...

Hi! Nice poem! Me likey :D Why does that phantom sit up there, its frozen tears dusty with age. I like this part the best. It's original. Overall, no nitpicks. ...

Overall, I loved it. Your flow in the story is good not too fast of too slow. The capturing of emotion is outstanding. I really like you descriptions, this one ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! Hope you like it. Nitpicks first :P The voices within the darkness got louder as I began to run down the endless hall of darkness with ...

This is just awesome! I love the story, how you've written it and everything. Just a few nitpicks: He winced, and ducked quickly, feeling the hairs on his head shift ...

I really like your poems. First poem : Now this was really interesting one , an unusual but really well expressed topic. Just a nitpick: I write Out of phobia ...

It's a really nice story with a good concept. The only thing I can say is that maybe you can expand the story a bit. Add more personality to the ...

Hi How about starting the story with her getting captured? Like how EXACTLY she got captured? Then you can go on my starting with the description of the room, ending ...

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Amazing! I repair my dreams, Though their wounds are jagged and deep. I heal my treasures, So they may stay with me forever, like rain falling from the sky. I ...