You laugh at my expense.
I stand there and take it.
You throw names my way,
I stand there let the tears fall.
You cause me pain,
So my thoughts of me become a distorted emotional chain.
You push me down and spit on my feelings,
I slowly feel as if my skin is peeling.
And all that's left is blood on the floor,
A puddle of me, a puddle of your distaste.
You leave me to bleed, leave me to waste.
An aching head and a broken heart.
My mind is beginning to drift apart.
I'm breaking down and you won't set me free,
With every hurtful word you abuse me.
Why can't I just cease to exist?
If I were gone I doubt I'd be missed.
I'm slowly dying now,
Slowly crying now,
And my heart is on fire.
My insides turn to ash,
Everything in me is crumbling down.
And as I begin to fade,
I notice the deep wounds you cut ,
And you didn't use a blade.
I smile for, you can hurt me no longer.
As I fall, I fall into nothing but dark.
But as I go I will always carry your scaring marks.
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I love <3 <3 <3 this poem! It's just awesome!
just one thing though..
Apart from that it was awesome!
-Angelreader77
I like this one. I can somehow relate everything you said in this poem...very good indeed. Not only that, you easily transfer an emotional feeling as we read your poetry, keep this one.
I think every single person can relate to this poem. It really reaches out to a wide range of people, and shows that everyone feels and everyone hurts, even if we don't want to. A beautiful poem
Hi there- i just felt like reading someones work on this site.
alex
I thought that alot of your sentiments in the poem were well worded and that you hve a good idea on these thoughts. I am sorry that someone has put you through this to make you write this kind of piece and i hope that you are ok now.
I didnt quite understand if you were going for a rhyming pattern or not, you might want to look at that a little, otherwise well done.
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