AngelKnight900

To start off, The one who looks on; asking for belief, the one who believes; asking for a savoir, the one saves; asking for death. is my favorite line. It ...

Does it really have to be this short? :/ When I read this, I instantly got interested until I noticed the length. If you actually had more for this, add ...

I liked this but in a way it was very rushed. You could have gotten into more detail about the parents death and the main characters time in the training ...

This. Was. Beautiful. I wasn't really feeling up to it when I saw the paragraphs but it was all worth it. What I think you need to look over is ...

Wow I was actually expecting a happy ending in the end of this poem while I was reading the first few stanzas but I still admire your unhappy ending. It ...

I really enjoyed the poem but it actually took me two looks to get it. Lol. What I liked about is how you express that darkness isn't something to really ...

Ummm, I really can't generate a good response for this but I will try. It wasn't really as I expected. A short story like this couldn't really attract much attention. ...

It's really well written. The dialogue is on point and you keep the reading interested. First when it comes to the flashback I think that you should make some type ...

Hmmm I'm interested in this story but I think that this little explanation of the story could just be used for the novel's profile and placed where the plot is ...

It's been such a long time since I read this that I actually almost forget what the story was about but I managed to get a recap. So far it's ...

Hmm....this really got me thinking so as I write this, I can't really just post an opinion about it right off the bat. I feel a lot of happiness in ...

Oh Ok because I was a little sad. I was like T_T why does it have to end so fast. I like it so more but I'm not in total ...

I got one word for this. AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW Okay, I'm going to be serious now. This was very well-written and you instantly grabbed my attention. This was soooo wonderful but

I'm a sucker for love poems and love songs. I think most people are and I think that people can make the most corniest poems ever but I think this ...

Wow this really spiked my curiosity. I liked how your title came in your story and it fit in with the novel. Most authors, upon introducing their story's title in ...