AndyS6

Thank you, I am glad my wording allowed for a deeper understanding of the train. :)

Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it. I will take your comments into consideration. :)

Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed the story :)

Glad you liked it, considering this is all based on a dream I had the night before I wrote it lol. I just wrote exactly what happened, so it does ...

Thank you so much. I am so glad you like my message and what I was trying to get across. It was just a spur of the moment thought when ...

Well keep writing my friend, you seem to have a lot of good ideas and are very good at writing; so keep it up. :)

Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it. I don't know what category it is either lol. But I am glad the message was able to get across well. :)

Great poem. It is written with a good flow to it. The ending of the poem was put together very well and allows for the readers own reflection on their ...

Thank you very much. That means a lot

thank you

Thank you, your critiques are actually really useful. A few of your comments actually make a lot of sense and was what I was looking for to make it a ...

The story is very well done. I feel as though it could have been broken up into some smaller paragraphs, allowing for more of a flow. Otherwise I thought it ...

The message is deep and I am a fan of it. The ending if very well written. Tthis made my day a bit better. Reminds you that there is still ...