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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dust to Dust

    Hey. I really enjoyed this. I think the mark of a good poem is that there is nothing distracting about it. Usually at some point in a poem there will ...

    Jul 19, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Maybe Tomorrow

    I will throw this disclaimer before I critique this: I don't quite understand the use of arcane language in contemporary poetry. Although you do use it well, I wonder what ...

    Jul 15, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Untitled Poem #4

    Hey, I really enjoyed this. I especially the first line of the second stanza. I think this really captures the fear of a lot of writers, that fear of being ...

    Jul 15, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Out There

    Some thoughts: If it weren't for the fact that you categorized this as a chapter of a science fiction novel, I'd probably feel comfortable assuming with 100% certainty that this ...

    Jul 5, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: homme du midi

    I really, really liked this. I think the parallel storyline with The Stranger is absolutely brilliant, and very well executed. I love the way that you've expanded the universe of ...

    Jul 5, 2012


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