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davidechoe13
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I absolutely love the way you melted the letters into such a graceful, Word. I am truly stunned as to your capability in writing, with such a passion and such joy im absolutely sure that no matter what anyone says,save, myself no one can stand in the way of this glorious work of magnificent ART. Absolutely splendid detail the way TELL the word its almost like a dream a living dream. With your word you feel you tell the mountains
"Shut Up Fools!" i am absolutely amazed with your work i wish to see more.
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Andsoonandso
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Some thoughts: If it weren't for the fact that you categorized this as a chapter of a science fiction novel, I'd probably feel comfortable assuming with 100% certainty that this is your way of greeting the kind folks here. After seeing that, my certainty dropped about 2 percentage points. As I take a peek to the right of my screen, I can see that you've been a member since exactly today, which brings me back up to about 99.999%. I think what this piece needs is more words.



I was promis'd on a time, To have a reason for my rhyme: From that time unto this season, I receiv'd nor rhyme nor reason.
— Edmund Spenser