Andrea2676Marie

Love the introduction. The reflection of thoughts with this character is phenomenal. I'm excited to keep reading the story. I'm also excited to find out who the "lugnut" character is. ...

I really like how you can be so descriptive with the setting in this chapter. You are writing an amazing book here. Also, I loved the way you portray the ...

You have a great base idea here. I really think you can build an awesome story out of this. However, my advice is to read through this a few times. ...

This was pretty intense! I like your style of writing though. Is this story based off of that movie that came out a few years ago about Abraham Lincoln the ...

You are really good at describing the surroundings and what is happening. It's also packed full of suspense and drama. I love the end of this chapter, it contains so ...

Oh my, this got me hooked. I really hope that you are working on more, I want to read the whole story! Even in only an introduction you paint a ...

I like this story, it has an interesting approach to the subject. A lot of people try to write about the world ending, and at first glance I thought it ...