Andie

Is it okay to split stanzas up by threes, because when I looked the poem over I kept wanting to make them two lines long because after two lines the ...

wow, I really liked it. It was a relatable poem but also was unique to your writing style. I don't agree with some of the comments that you need to ...

I really liked your poem and could feel the emotion behind it. Good job, I couldn't find anything wrong with it. : )

Wow, I thought that your story was very cool and I really like your writing style. Good job : )

wow, i really liked this and I'm not going to dare to mess with it because I like it the way it is. It's so random but makes sense at ...

Hi! You said you needed help with punctuation. Well when I write poetry, sometimes I like to not use punctuation because it helps with the flow. So remember that's always ...

I really liked it, the it had great flow. The only thing I would change is the commas, I would put a line break behind every comma so that it ...

Oh! I missed that, thanks I'll change it right away.

thank you all for your help, I'll be sure to work on this some more!

I really liked it, It was like being in a dream. It had the same pace as a dream also, by which I mean it flows well. Good job!

Thank you sooooo much for your reviews, I'll be sure to edit it soon!

It takes alot of guts to post your feelings for everyone to see, so kudos to you. I know I don't know you but, its easy to see that you're ...

I liked it. It was really natural and flowed well. I especially like that it was a military poem. kudos!

wow, I really liked it, especially the way you used the candle and the "sliver of orange". That was great.

I'm probably not being so helpful by saying this but, I agree with everyone else, it needs a stronger tune.Otherwise the lyrics were really good.