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i really like it! you know i love your short stories so that will probably not come as a surprise ;] 2 things: 1) "Well...I could go off into a ...

I LOVED THIS. great, intriguing, compelling, unique short story. really great. i suck at writing short stories, so when i see a great one like this, i am incredibly jealous. ...

chocoholic, i don't think it's scary. sure, it's not all fluffliness and rainbows and whatnot, and it's definitely intense, but it's not persay creepy. schizophrenic people face that type of ...

i really liked it! really compelling for a short story! but it CAN be difficult to understand at times. the character HIMSELF states that he is a demon, and yet ...

i loved it! it was really compelling, especially for a short story! so the ending WAS supposed to imply that they were eating him, then? vair interesting. idk why but ...

it's definitely cute, but maybe you should establish a bit more information about the characters? also, why does audrey go from showing autumn her laptop to taking autumn to go ...

i really do like it! i think a bit more background information about diana, her relationships with kate and aj, and all of that jazz, should be included, though. & ...

ah, i like it all the better now that you've told us that, chocoholic! and i liked it before! but, yes, you should make it more clear that she is ...

oo, very interesting/intriguing/good/unconventional. me gusta! and everyone needs to stop with the purple;; people DO have purple (violet?) eyes it doesn't mean this should go in fantasy unless your c

i like diary stories, but i think you should provide a little bit more information in the entries. we want to be introduced to the writer, not JUST laurie. unless ...

roya. it wasn't THAT cliche. i liked it! plain and simple. grammatical errors, yes, but others have already corrected that. you write SO MANY different things. i struggle just to ...

chapter name makes andi's brain go: "the phantommmm of the opera is there the phantom is there inside my mind" now that that is out of my system: critz! okay. ...

that's amazing. i don't really have much to critique; i think everyone else has handled the gramamtical errors well enough on their own. i just turned 14 and i love ...

you love MY style? i love YOUR style. great descriptions and details and everything =]] if you liked that chapter, that's just an excerpt from the novel. i have the ...

great beginning =]] i love adventure/fantasy stories. keep it up! yeah, i want to be a music journalist too! i love going to concerts and listening to all types of ...