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I know exactly what you mean with the inside the head thing. A lot of the things I write when I try to go back over it with new eyes, ...

No problem! Again, I really like this story and think it shows promise. :) :) :)

:) You're welcome :) I feel the same way about the two different worlds. I think of it like how the keyboard can't judge me so I don't hold anything ...

Hi! So Dae has no freewill when it comes to Jay? That witch should really butt out of the girls life... And I'm also a bit new to this YWS'ing, ...

:) I'm just putting it out there in case I do offend you :) And you're welcome!

Hi! I can most definitely relate. Sometimes it's impossible to put to paper a image from your head, no matter how much you've written. So frustrating!

Hi! I had no idea about the pin-the-heart-you-have-to-fall-in-love thing! That's really interesting. What kind of time does she have left? It seems like a really specific punishment for the woman ...

Just reviewed 2.1 and mentioned a lot of this! This is a great story so far.

Hi! While I loved the dynamic the characters have, the story didn't have any real direction I could grasp, so unless I figure out where its headed, I won't write ...

Thanks! This review is exactly what I needed! *happy dance*

I'm laughing. Hard. It never occurred to me that they might seem like stuffed animals...just the picture of three plushes lost in the big wide world....no. Dusk, Bon, and Sean ...