AnarchyWolf

Sorry for the slow reply. Thanks for all of the pointers :) I'll add them in when I start editing the story.

Thank you so much for the review :) I'll correct the mistakes when I finish the novel and go through the rewriting stage. I'll also go and read and review ...

You're welcome :) I'll go and read Dr. Carnival now.

Thank you for reviewing :)

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You're welcome :) No - now I've reread it, it was just me being stupid :)

Thank you so much for the review! I'll go and add a little about the moon and the sky in an earlier paragraph right now. The ending is up for ...

It's fine :) I'm really sorry if I offended you. It wasn't my intention. -AnarchyWolf

Thanks for the review :) I'll be sure to add in the corrections when I rewrite. -AnarchyWolf

Thanks so much for reviewing :)

Of course not. There are some very good aspects to this chapter, as I pointed out in my review. There are also some aspects that need work, such as your ...

Thank you so much :) I'm glad you liked it.

Oh, my gosh. I'm so sorry for not replying sooner. I was reading over my old work and rearranging my portfolio and I just found this great review here, lying ...

Thank you for reviewing :) I'll add in the corrections when I rewrite

Thanks so much for reviewing these three chapters :)