Anamel

By God I mean literal God, like the Christian one and thank you

Thank you for the support!

Thank you so much! Your interpretation of the meaning is on point :)

on the line you want to make fit together with the others, press shift and backspace at the beginning of the line then shift enter and they go together

Thank you so much! I'm honored you like my poems and I'm happy the way it makes you feel when reading them. This is what inspires me to keep writing ...

Thanks! It's still a bit messy and I'll probably remove some stuff and change it up, so hopefully I can tie up those lose ends

And true about the rhyming but then I get complaints about not rhyming

It means a person whose driven by lust and doesn%u2019t even care to know the person and wants to own them and when the narrator stays in their safe shell ...

Thank you!

Thanks, I have trouble with scene breaks usually because I'm not sure how to do them but I will work on it for sure

This is such an amazing review, thank you from the bottom of my heart. I appreciate your critiques and will work on them. I actually based this poem off of ...

This is such an amazing review, thank you from the bottom of my heart. I appreciate your critiques and will work on them. I actually based this poem off of ...

Thank you! Appreciate it.

Thank you for pointing those things out! Hopefully with some more editing and the suggestions you gave me I can make it be easier to read

Thanks for catching that, I didn%u2019t realize I actually had to mention what people said that. I snuck in his age in his own dialogue though I%u2019m sure it%u2019s easy ...