Anabelle

I love you.

Thanks so much for the helpful review! I am trying to make Avery and Samuel's relationship seem as flat and predictable on purpose to foil the relationship she will begin ...

Thank you! This actually was a journal entry from a while that I just transferred onto this site. I didn't realize that by classifying it as an essay, I had ...

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Thank you for your review. I'm still trying to figure out the whole punctuation when writing dialogue things, haha. It's a little confusing to me, so I promise I'll work ...

Thanks for sharing your opinions!

Oh, I see! Thank you for helping me with that. :)

Thank you so much! I see what you're saying about punctuation, but I'm just not sure of the rules. I could use some more examples, if you don't mind! haha

Oh my goodness, thank you so much! Yeah, I realize that I need to put more description into Samuel. I'll try to do that on Part 2. :) Thanks again ...

Ohhhh, yeah! See, it was my fault. It's all making sense now. haha

Thank you! It means a lot, really. Yeah, I realized that I didn't have much description on Sam; I'll work on that in the next parts. :/ Seriously, thank you ...

Yeah, I think I got it now. His wife is dead and when he takes that pill he can communicate with her? If I'm wrong, don't get discouraged... I can ...

Thanks for your kind words. :)

Thanks so much for the review. :)

No problem! Also, I never thought your story was from the Bible... don't know why someone would've thought that. ;)