Amfliflier

Oh my gosh. This was really sad and powerful. I mean, it was amazing, but I'm on the verge of tears right now! The perspective of the little innocent girl ...

Why hello there! This was really good. I really liked how you used a prompt to help. I'm not sure why, but stories seem better if the person used a ...

Wow, this was really good! I liked the mystery at the beginning, how all she could see were his eyes. It really made me want to keep reading. I also ...

Hey hey hey! Don't worry, I'll try not to be too harsh! ;) Okay, so about the story: It was actually pretty good. I said this before in someone else's ...

Hi! This was pretty good, although it was a little confusing. The way they said what grade they were in made it sound like they were in another world or ...

Wow I really liked this. Just everything about it was great. I liked how it was written in olden times, because it seems like everything now is written from a ...

I liked this. It was very real, and it's what's going through every teenager's head right now. I love how it was so down to earth, and you didn't ruin ...

Haha. I liked this. Don't be offended, I said "Haha" because I know someone named Callum and these people were nothing alike! ;) Anyways, I really liked this piece. The ...

Wow Skins, this was really good. The spoiler at the end, how you said you didn't tell why he wanted to commit suicide, I actually liked. It gives the reader ...

The short story is supposed to portray a hero, who's lover has been poisoned with an irreversible poison. Having no way to save her life, he has to choose between ...

Okay. I realize you probably worked hard on this, but this could've been a lot better. First of all, it was really short. Second of all, there was really no ...

Okay, well. Hmm... This was pretty good, but a little confusing. A few things: I didn't see how it was relevant to the story that you said Darren was bisexual. ...

Wow, I had to read this a few times. Is that good or bad? ;) Just kidding. Anyways, this piece was really good. I liked how it was short, sweet, ...

Haha, I'm glad you pointed out that they were still in elementary school, because I was thinking, "In what school are they still teaching kids to add fractions?". At the ...

Hi! This was pretty good, but it doesn't seem very much like a romance story. It seems more like a realistic fiction type thing. But other than that it was ...