User avatar

AmeliaGryffin

  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: Missing

    Happy Easter xx

    Apr 16, 2017
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: Missing

    As patronising as this is, you still gave me lots of good tips. Thank you :)

    Apr 16, 2017
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: I've been dead for a while now

    Thank you so much for your review!

    Jan 22, 2017
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: I've been dead for a while now

    Thank you so much for your review!

    Jan 22, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Fair Gone Wrong

    Thank you!

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Fair Gone Wrong

    I'm dying

    Dec 27, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Fair Gone Wrong

    Oh my gosh, oh my gosh! Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, my mind has been blown by the positive comments you have made. Honestly I'm ...

    Dec 27, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: She Is

    I enjoyed this story very much! The opening grabbed my attention immediately, and I found myself wanting to know what happened to the child. I found Maia's back story very ...

    Oct 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Literature Re: The Distance Between Us

    I enjoyed this story immensely. Right from the start I was very interested, I really love the opening paragraph. Throughout your story there was so much imagery, and I found ...

    Oct 20, 2016
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Why won't it end?

    Oh my gosh thank you so much!

    Nov 15, 2015
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Why won't it end?

    Thanks so much for reviewing and all the nice things you said. Titles aren't my strong point hehe

    Nov 5, 2015
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Why won't it end?

    Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it

    Nov 5, 2015
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Why won't it end?

    Thank you very much, that review is really helpful :) The only reason I put 16 as being the magic age is because that's the age that you turn into ...

    Nov 5, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Turn Right on Old Sycamore Street

    I loved this! Beautiful description of the sky in the third paragraph, that was one of my favourite parts. You described the sounds so well I could practically hear them ...

    Nov 3, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: The Creature Changer

    Ooh I loved this. Very nice opening and cool ending. It was very interesting

    Nov 3, 2015


Sometimes wisdom came from strange places, even from giant teenaged goldfish.
— Rick Riordan, The Mark of Athena