Amberla93

Thank you so much! I was not quite happy with this, and these changes make sense. Editing my work... not something I'm good at. So again, thanks!

Thank you for the review! I rather needed it, and it was quite helpful. I tend to write straight from emotion, and have the problem of reading what "I thought ...

This is so very full of emotion. I quite enjoyed reading it even though I was saddened by the end. I suppose you meant for that to happen though. Good ...

Thanks guys, I haven't been able to log on here in ages, so I haven't written in a long time either.. (Laptop died a few months back.) I'm glad ya'll ...

Thank ya'll so much! I wrote this straight from the heart, so I'm glad that it seems to be well liked. It is based upon what I've been through, nothing ...

Ello, I've read dome of your pieces, and while I like them, I LOVE this poem. The message, the flow and the rhyming of it, everything. By far my favorite. ...

Thank all of you for your reviews. :) And for taking the time to read.

So sweet, but oh, so sad! I was near tears! I loved it, great job! :)

You did an amazing job of expessing what so many of us feel.. I loved the part about us only being human.. No, I loved the whole thing! Great job! ...

Agreed, but see now you can write more things and post those too! :p

Very Chazzy dear, but something didn't make sense to me... "I please that you take that step," Say what? You may want to edit that...

I just want to say thank you to all of you for the reviews. I'm very grateful for all of the advice. And I'm glad those of you who liked ...

Hi, I can find nothing wrong with this. In fact, I very much enjoyed it. I can relate to the girl in middle school, so it caught my attention early ...

Thank you all for the reviews! I tried to edit it somewhat. The reason for the title was, it was that sentence that inspired the entire story. "It's called a ...

Wow.. is all I can say to this.. simply wow...