Amberchelli

Wow, that was very interesting, I liked it alot, you weren't able to quit grasp the meaning till the end, and thats a good tactic to keep the reader interested, ...

WOW!!!!! this is realllllyyyyyy GOOOD!!!! my favorite part was Not dead, not yet Not for a hard long time Wounded, the front of that train really wasn’t fluff Hit by ...

hahahahaha i think you just captured every teenagers mind-process after a few hours of homework, you definitely got mine, its cool though, you definitely have a point, and it makes ...

well, it could use a little help, but overall its understandable, the message should get clearer, if you make it longer, but im just saying, i liked it, i guess ...

WOW, I REALLLY REALLY REALLY LIKED THIS, now if you ask my family.. i have no emotion, heart.. or compassion… but this really really almost made me cry, and welcome ...

its a strange poem, i think many people will not like you saying that your god, it will probably cause some arguements, but yes i understand freedom of speech and ...

hmm.. i think this could turn into one of those life lesson kind of stories, your right something about the clouds, makes freedom seem like a possibility, it also shows ...

WOW!!!!!! Totally starts the book off with a BAM!, if this was a book, i dont think i'd be able to set it down, i just have one confusion [quote ...

at first, I thought the boy was mourning, over someone, but after your explanation, as i do find it very intelligent, and confusing in the same, I really liked it, ...

funny, i just wrote a poem like this a few weeks ago, but i really like this, its like the break up, F you, poem. its one of my new ...

ok, so far i've only read this chapter, but i really like this,it seems that you have captured a new story, it hasnt been told before, its a refresh on ...

[color=#4040FF]wow, you've captured; the i dont quite know what to call it, but its like the picture of goodbye, the good side of death, this is amazing, its amazing, i ...

ok, first chapter I've read of this, is Chapter four, but now you have me hooked, i want to read the rest, this is amazing, i forgot i was on ...

wow, this is really good, I've seen abusive relationships, and you've captured it beautifully. i truly love this poem. its amazing, i expect to see more from you, let me ...