Published October 14, 2011
Darkness -- suffocating, painful darkness. This is what surrounds me when I open my eyes. But, when my eyelids lie in a resting embrace, a new world is dissolved into reality.
Welcome, this is my world -- where the moon shines with a rainbow glory and every particle throbs with the blood of hope. Where darkness is celebrated along with light, where my demons become sacred.
Where fantasy breathes in all it's glory.
I float in the golden sky with the crown of eternity. My fear of heights vanishes in this sacred sanctuary.
I am successful, I am fearless, I am GOD.
Fame -- Amen.
Love -- Amen.
Art -- Amen.
Power -- Amen.
Dreams -- Amen.
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its a strange poem, i think many people will not like you saying that your god, it will probably cause some arguements, but yes i understand freedom of speech and all that, this is a good poem and you should make it longer though, and add more detail.