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AmberMelanie

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  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: The Space Between Us

    Dec 26, 2024
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Science Re: "before i die" - chapter one

    Hello! Thank you for your comments! Yes, I did reference Laufey!! Since it's in the future, I think she will still be listened to as a "vintage artist" because her ...

    Oct 24, 2024
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Science Re: "before i die" - chapter one

    Oct 24, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: disposable cup

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    redcarnation~ Wow, this is a great and really interesting work! Even though I know it is about a cup, I think it could also represent humans and how we are ...

    Sep 20, 2024
  • Short Story » General, Teen Fiction Re: Kitty Mei Saves The Day: Chapter Two "Knock, Knock"

    Hi! This story takes place in pretty much present day, approx. 2015 or so. My family used to have a "home phone" landline, and since they are in middle school ...

    Jun 4, 2024
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Humor Re: Prompt: Write a story that includes someone dancing in a bar.

    Hi! I wanted them to order a drink because the bar had a rule about you have to order if you're already seated. I don't know if it makes sense, ...

    May 30, 2024
  • Poetry » Health, Dramatic Re: 3AM

    I meant more of "tie it all together" or "to tie a bow on it" but I didn't really know how to say it...sorry about the confusion! I meant it ...

    May 29, 2024
  • Short Story » Humor, Romantic Re: A Love Note

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    Mahima~ I really like this story you wrote. It really captures the college experience and "bad luck" a lot of students feel, especially on the first day. It reminds me ...

    May 19, 2024
  • Short Story » Humor, Romantic Re: A Love Note

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    May 18, 2024
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Kitty Mei Saves The Day: Chapter One "The Boy's Bathroom"

    TOPAWG~ Thank you so much for your comments! I have already written this short story and am releasing it chapter by chapter. However with your comments in mind I will ...

    May 18, 2024
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Kitty Mei Saves The Day: Chapter One "The Boy's Bathroom"

    May 17, 2024


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