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Re: Anything But Ordinary Part 1
That was strange, it had a some little parts that were wrong. You might want to proof-read and then edit. Other than that though it was great!! Alzora
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: Inner Beauty
Wow. This. Is Great. I. Loved. It. SO MUCH!!! Alzora
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: The Breakup
Wow, this is soooo cool!! I didn't see anything wrong with it except... When she prank calls Cooper is that in the past or present? Alzora
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: Miracle, (just make one)
Wow, I had no idea people could actually think up songs like that... YOU'RE AMAZING!! This is a cool song, I wish I could hear it sung... Alzora
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: A Small Dog's Major Problem (Deleted)
This is ok, it's a little boring in my opinion. I don't know why the little dog doesn't like his name so much? It's ok. It's not like he was ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: Totally Different
This is cool. It sounds just like I've always read about public school (I'm home schooled). I think it adds a cool ring to it the way it rhymes.
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: The Vampire's Story: A New Begining
This is good, but a little confusing. I also thought Twilight when I first saw it. I think it needs a little more explanation and emotion for the main character...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: Here I Am
This (I think) is really well written. It has great emotion!! Love it!!
Oct 4, 2010