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  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: A Love Like War (Valex) - Part 2

    You have been so patience and smokind. To make it up to you, I want to know what you like to read and I'll make something. I know you don't ...

    Aug 9, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: A Love Like War (Valex)

    There's more than one part to it, and trust me, it gets WAY more original as well as more interesting. Thank you for your review. :)

    Aug 8, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: A Love Like War (Valex)

    Thank you for your review. I will tell you I do make a lot of mistakes as far as grammar, especially when I'm writing a story a three o'clock in ...

    Aug 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Wandering in the Abyss

    I tried to make it as realistic as possible. The day I wrote this, I was having a very difficult day, and it was how I was feeling. I'm glad ...

    Aug 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Wandering in the Abyss

    Thank you. Maybe I could change "floating" to "drooping" or skmethingong the lines of that. Thank you so much for your comment! It really helps me out a lot, and ...

    Aug 1, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: A Love Like War (Valex)

    Thank you very much :)

    Jul 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: We the People by ScarletDreams14

    It was amazing! It's the truth, and the truth hurts an it's harsh. It's honestly the most realistic poem I've probably ever read. It really hits home on how the ...

    Jul 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: We the People by ScarletDreams14

    This is TOTALY amazeballs!

    Jul 28, 2014


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