AlyTheBookworm

Thank-you so much for the kind comment! :) The poem is actually about a family member of mine. I'm glad that I was able to successfully convey the sense of ...

Thank-you for the review Hkumar :)

I agree, that line would flow better with an "and". I'm glad that the message came across clearly! Thank-you for the review Anamel :)

Thanks for the review Mithrin. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Thanks for the review Gem!

Thanks! I love your poetry so that means a lot. :)

Thank-you for the review Alfonso! I don't write much poetry and always felt that I was better suited to prose, so I'm glad that you liked it. "It" is referring ...

Hey brook, beautiful poem! Poetry isn't my strong suit, so I won't attempt to critique or review this. However I really enjoyed it and it made me think, so I ...

Oh okay, cool! That makes sense. I tried searching up a lot of the terms but couldn't find anything so I assumed they were made-up, but I agree that if ...

I think that's a good idea (writing the next chapter as a result of this one, as a possible starting place for readers). I actually really like the word choice ...

Hey Sound! This isn't a review and I don't have any criticism, I just happened across this and wanted to say that you have a really beautiful voice. I love ...

Thank-you for the review! The reason for the curtain and the monotony of the work are both explained later on, but I'm glad you pointed it out. I was trying ...

The point you made about Kaisa's dialogue is really helpful. That part felt off to me, but I didn't know exactly why. This is the exact kind of feedback I ...

Thanks again for the review! :D

Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it. :)