AlyTheBookworm

Hey Liminality! This was a really interesting read- and I love the mental images and feelings that are conjured up by the words and phrases you chose. I'm not entirely ...

Hey legendary! c: Haven't written a review here in a million years, but I'm getting back into it with some poetry! I'll go over the things I feel could/should be ...

Hey, welcome to YWS! This site's been a haven to me for the past four years and I honestly don't know what I'd do without it. I hope that you'll ...

Hey Alpacaing :) WOW I love the eye-popping colors! That vivid yellow and pink are probably my favorite thing about this- though the pose and expression come close. I think ...

Hey harper! I've never reviewed art on YWS before but I'll do my best and try to be as helpful as possible. I think the strongest parts of this portrait ...

Hey Dreamworx! Here for a quick review. It's been a long time since my last review, but I'll do my best and try to be as honest and helpful as ...

Hey Oxara! Here with a hopefully-helpful review. :) I'll start with what I think could be improved, then talk about what I liked. Since Anamel covered a lot of the ...

Hey Shadow! Here with a quick review for review day. I haven't read the previous chapters, so I'll be focused a bit more on the writing itself than the story. ...

Hey RachMilty! Aly here for a short review. Wow- I can't believe this work has been in the Green Room for an entire year. Hopefully, this review will still be ...

Hey Dreamworx! Here's another short review. I don't have much more to say about the plot that I didn't mention in my last review. It's interesting, and I'm glad Zeus' ...

Hey Dreamworx! Here with a quick review for review day. I've just spent the last two hours or so catching up on this story, and I'm really enjoying it so ...

Hey DepressedCat! Here with a quick review. This prologue is a bit short, so I won't have too much to say about plot/characters until your first chapter is out. I'll ...

Hey Radrook! Here's a real quick review. I loved it! It's well-written and hilarious, and I was really symphasizing with the Moluskanoid- hoping that he would somehow get the job. ...

Hey Dreamworx, Aly here with a (hopefully) quick review. :) First off, I didn't notice any typos or mispelled words. I did notice that you use a ton of ellipsis. ...

Hey, Aly here with a real quick review (I'm procrastinating on homework right now). :) Your grammar is pretty good, so I'm going to focus on the story. So, first ...