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Alwaysea

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Hybrids: Prologue

    Heyyy....quick review from my point of view and what I have understood from the story. Let's get into it...The facility looms over the children like a shadow, holding secrets that ...

    Sep 29, 2024
  • Script » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: THE QUEEN (Part 2)

    Hi...it's me again, a quick review from my point of view A small suggestion: you’ve labeled both titles as Part 1, which could be confusing for readers. It would be ...

    Sep 29, 2024
  • Script » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: THE QUEEN (Part 1)

    Hi...a quick review point of view. The story centers around two worlds, humans and snakes, fighting for power. Amrita, a strong character, puts her child’s safety first, showing the importance ...

    Sep 29, 2024
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Fanfiction Re: a collection of Gravity Falls short stories

    Hiii...a multiverse that's my first one. It's quite engaging and entertaining. Comes to Grammer i am also lazy so don't think too much..the enotion that carries is important. At the ...

    Sep 29, 2024
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Victoria’s story-The adventures of Poppy McLain

    Hi....here to pop in for a quick review from my point of view. Firstly, the tale revolves around the Donovan sisters, Victoria and Veronica. They share a deep interest in ...

    Sep 29, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Spiritual, Romantic Re: The two sides of the same coin

    Hi...a quick review from my point of view. The story was captivating, but it left many questions unanswered, especially about Ace's family. It seems Ace has gone through a lot ...

    Sep 29, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Mystery / Suspense Re: Doofus Detectives Ch 2 : Modern Day Mummy

    Ohhh....I loved the plot. The details of the crime scene raise many questions. The accumulation of dust suggests it had been windy, yet the body appeared untouched and not decomposed, ...

    Sep 29, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Mystery / Suspense Re: Doofus Detectives Ch 1 : A Crime a Day Keeps Homelessness Away

    Heyy..I am here to write a quick review from my point of view. I really enjoyed the detective novels! The way the mysteries are solved is so engaging. Adi Agarwal ...

    Sep 29, 2024
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Existential Crisis (A Frog and Toad Story)

    Hi...a quick review from my point of view... The story immediately grabbed my attention with its title, reminding me of "The Frog Prince," a cherished fairy tale of mine. The ...

    Sep 28, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: I Don't Like Romance, Though?

    Hi...welcome to YWS From the very first page, I was completely hooked. This book evokes the irresistible charm of K-dramas, where the rich male lead's playful teasing creates a whirlwind ...

    Sep 28, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: SOMEWHERE

    Hi....welcome to YWS This poem really captivated me. It explores the idea of wanting an escape—a place where we can truly be ourselves without needing to explain anything to anyone. ...

    Sep 28, 2024
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Health Re: Title: Mind as One

    Hi...welcome to YWS "Mind as one life is the same as many, The mind of two is the strength we desire, Steady in the state of the reality in which ...

    Sep 27, 2024
  • Other » Literature, Narrative Re: Diary's thought

    Hi...welcome to YWS. The writing in this piece is truly distinctive, particularly with its innovative approach of presenting the diary as a character in its own right. This perspective creates ...

    Sep 27, 2024
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Other Re: Nina’s torment

    Your writing really stands out, and it’s clear you have a talent for poetry and novels. The way you create your characters is impressive. I especially liked how you captured ...

    Sep 27, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: Chapter 1: At the airport

    Hi! I came across your story and really enjoyed the writing. You have a great way of sharing details, especially the excitement of the trip with your mom. The moments ...

    Sep 26, 2024


That awkward moment when you jump out a window because your friend jumped out a window, then you remember that your other friend can fly.
— Rick Riordan, The Ship of the Dead