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Okay, so I thought this would be intriguing and it sounded quite good just by reading the title, and what do you know, I was right! I found that your ...

I like the simplicity yet significance of this chapter, and the mysterious cliffhanger is just awesome. I really like your writing style and I'm eager to read the next part. ...

It's a great story you've got here :) It's so sad, Clayton died?! Ah, well, it's still awesome, and I love how you went from past into present tense in ...

This is a great story you've got here, and I love the wording. The names are awesome too, but the only slight criticism I have is that you seem to ...

Nice! I love how dark and mysterious it is! I love stories like these and I've not seen many of these on here yet so this is refreshing! I love ...

I like your style of writing and the symbolism you used, and I can see where you're coming from with the three glaring flaws. At the line "my sweet, and ...

I really like the way the poem portrays so much and how it allows the reader to imagine what the meaning might be behind the words. Really well thought out, ...

Hello Torripoppy! I really like the idea you have here for this story, it's very intriguing and it certainly hooked me in. I admire how your story creates such a ...

I really like you poem and its insightful approach to someone buried deep in their thoughts. I especially like the symbolism and similes you used throughout the entire poem. It ...

Hello, ExtremeFreakShow!! I think this is a very good piece of writing in its unique quality, and I especially admired your use of rough simile in the "my throat a ...

I personally think this is a very insightful and detailed story :) It's really good, in my opinion, and there's nothing to improve where grammar and punctuality are concerned, and ...