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I'm not very good at reviewing, so bear with me, please. That was pretty good! I really liked it! The character seemed real, and I can see why she hates ...

You will need: *5 things (any thingy will do!) *half a cup of bling king fling *2 teaspoons of fine crystal mashing ling What to do : 1.Boil 3 things ...

Hi! I've got the exact same comment as MKate: Hi, ehte92 I really enjoyed this poem, it felt deep and pure somehow, and I loved how you gave such a ...

I'm glad you're not depressed! :o As far as the poem goes, I think it holds a lot of potential! I mean, your character essentially watching someone die from cancer. ...

It rhymes, but it is very simple; I think it can be improved further. Allow me to explain: Poetry is all about painting a picture with words. The goal is ...

Hi! A really great poem! My only comment is about this line: Good books, Bad books, Books that are inbetween Putting 'in-between' kind of broke the rhythm. I guess you ...

Wow, I finished reading it yesterday! I agree to what you have said, the ending was kind of unsatisfying and I wondered about the same questions. I never knew that ...

Oh my God, that's the most hilarious Twifanfic I've ever read! Laughed out loud so many times, and I just loved it. Very nice writing techniques and balanced dialogue. All ...

Sierra, when you said that Jacob never imprinted on Renesmee. I think you meant that he never imprinted BELLA. It clearly says so at the end of Book Two: Jacob. ...

(*sob sob sob*) How touching, how emotional, an excellent piece of work. I had tears in my eyes, and when my brother asked me about them, I told him," You ...

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