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Hi there, Alpha here for a review. This is an interesting poem that took me a few reads to uncover the essence of. There are many elements at play here: ...

Hi, Chocolate Cello. Reader's Note to your Author's Note: 1) You can use the [img] tag to add a picture to your story. Just put the link to the picture ...

Hi, Chips! Alpha here to review. Before I start, I'd like to clarify that I am by no means I competent poet or a practiced critic. But I do love ...

Hi, lburkeen12, Alpha here to review! Writing an original short story is a hard thing to do. It's too easy to fall into the 'ah screw my luck, this is ...

Hi hello hello, Alpha here to review. My review will go like this: A little bit about grammar and sentence structure (I need a shorter word for that. Syntax?), plot, ...

Hello, Alpha here to review the prologue. I think you should repost this in parts. I've started a bit of the first chapter then got daunted by the length of ...

Hi, welcome to YWS. This reads like a diary entry rather than a poem. Rhymes seem to be placed randomly and your work doesn't form anything concrete. But hey, we ...

Hi there Omni, I don't think I've given you a review before. I know this is a fanfic, and I haven't watched Legend of Korra ( yet ), so my ...

So I'm a late follower but I've been seeing this title being thrown around and it has this funky vibe to it, so I thought Why the hell not? and ...

Hi there, Flite! Good to see this updated. c: (I actually like this uploading pace- reviewing tends to drain me, lol.) But I digress, shall we skip to the review? ...

Hey, Flite! Let's get this on. The first thing I did after reading this was to look up Of Monsters and Men. x) Good thing? Bad thing? Not sure, to ...

Heeey, I believe that I haven't given you a review before, so here goes. c: Oh god, Unc. What do we have here? xD There are many things I like ...

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The first thought I had was about the name-- people in my country stopped called their daughters Khalifa and it was strictly a male name.. even when you entered your ...

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