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Re: Gallus Gallus Domesticus-For The Love Of Chicken!
Hi there, Alpha here for a review. This is an interesting poem that took me a few reads to uncover the essence of. There are many elements at play here: ...
Jan 12, 2021 -
Re: Martha
Hi, Chocolate Cello. Reader's Note to your Author's Note: 1) You can use the [img] tag to add a picture to your story. Just put the link to the picture ...
Aug 7, 2015 -
Re: On the road to Damascus
Hi, Chips! Alpha here to review. Before I start, I'd like to clarify that I am by no means I competent poet or a practiced critic. But I do love ...
Aug 7, 2015 -
Re: Bad Day
Hi, lburkeen12, Alpha here to review! Writing an original short story is a hard thing to do. It's too easy to fall into the 'ah screw my luck, this is ...
Jun 2, 2015 -
Re: Protectors of Gantaro
Hi hello hello, Alpha here to review. My review will go like this: A little bit about grammar and sentence structure (I need a shorter word for that. Syntax?), plot, ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Heaven's Sin
Hello, Alpha here to review the prologue. I think you should repost this in parts. I've started a bit of the first chapter then got daunted by the length of ...
Mar 23, 2015 -
Re: random words
Hi, welcome to YWS. This reads like a diary entry rather than a poem. Rhymes seem to be placed randomly and your work doesn't form anything concrete. But hey, we ...
Mar 8, 2015 -
Re: An Open Book
Hi there Omni, I don't think I've given you a review before. I know this is a fanfic, and I haven't watched Legend of Korra ( yet ), so my ...
Feb 3, 2015 -
Re: Eight Reasons Why I Kissed Hayden Beaufort (Part 1/8) - *Edited*
So I'm a late follower but I've been seeing this title being thrown around and it has this funky vibe to it, so I thought Why the hell not? and ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Re:Miniscence 1.2
Hi there, Flite! Good to see this updated. c: (I actually like this uploading pace- reviewing tends to drain me, lol.) But I digress, shall we skip to the review? ...
Jan 19, 2015 -
Re: Re:Miniscence 1.1
Hey, Flite! Let's get this on. The first thing I did after reading this was to look up Of Monsters and Men. x) Good thing? Bad thing? Not sure, to ...
Jan 15, 2015 -
Re: .
Heeey, I believe that I haven't given you a review before, so here goes. c: Oh god, Unc. What do we have here? xD There are many things I like ...
Jan 15, 2015 -
Re: Mirror Image?
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Nov 3, 2014 -
Re: ​Fireworks
The first thought I had was about the name-- people in my country stopped called their daughters Khalifa and it was strictly a male name.. even when you entered your ...
Sep 5, 2014 -
Re: 1 || I Do Not Need A Boyfriend
First, to get your worries out of the way, YWS has a strict copyright policy. The only copying of your work that you'll see is the one quoted in reviews. ...
Aug 27, 2014
