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Re: boy, i
Good riddance to him~
Jan 13, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 1: Gone
this chapter based on that disaster?
Jan 13, 2020 -
Re: dream-talk
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Jan 13, 2020
This poem was a bit confusing to read, in a good way. It really felt like I was seeing someone's dream. Perhaps this is only because I'm not a good ... -
Re: Chapter 1: Gone
I'm sorry I can't give decent reviews...But my main thought while reading this chapter was, "I feel you, Ashe. Really..." Somehow, Ashe's situation feels relatable (getting your portfolio erased). The
Jan 13, 2020 -
Re: I Am a Ghost
I am a any chance, is it based on the novel by Natsume Soseki?
Dec 2, 2019 -
Re: Dreams!!!
This is a very positive poem. I enjoyed reading it a lot. It's good to have dreams and things you want to do, no matter what happens. I especially liked ...
Nov 28, 2019 -
Re: [DELETED]
Thanks^^
Nov 28, 2019 -
Re: 03. The Invisible Kid
Got it^
Nov 12, 2019 -
Re: My world
YWS tends to post reviews twice....
Nov 1, 2019 -
Re: My world
What a beautiful world your world is.^^ I like the strong nature-related imagery you've used throughout the work. I especially like the second-to-last stanza, where you compare the coming and ...
Nov 1, 2019 -
Re: Revolution
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Oct 31, 2019
This is a really good poem. The "blood-spattered graffiti" and the "story of a people failed" lines really bring out the poor state of the "rebels." Indeed, blood stained artwork ... -
Re: Darkness Within!
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Oct 31, 2019
Darkness within the speaker in this poem is being strangled by her own dreams and her unwillingness to see them through? That is a common problem among people nowadays (nods). ... -
Re: hell
A powerful description of Hell.
Oct 31, 2019 -
Re: Little Red Riding Hood
The poor grandmother must be a nervous wreck by now...
Oct 31, 2019 -
Re: Roses
Is there a theme behind this work?
Oct 29, 2019