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AliceFairfield

  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: boy, i

    Good riddance to him~

    Jan 13, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1: Gone

    this chapter based on that disaster?

    Jan 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: dream-talk

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    This poem was a bit confusing to read, in a good way. It really felt like I was seeing someone's dream. Perhaps this is only because I'm not a good ...

    Jan 13, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1: Gone

    I'm sorry I can't give decent reviews...But my main thought while reading this chapter was, "I feel you, Ashe. Really..." Somehow, Ashe's situation feels relatable (getting your portfolio erased). The

    Jan 13, 2020
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: I Am a Ghost

    I am a any chance, is it based on the novel by Natsume Soseki?

    Dec 2, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Dreams!!!

    This is a very positive poem. I enjoyed reading it a lot. It's good to have dreams and things you want to do, no matter what happens. I especially liked ...

    Nov 28, 2019
  • Other » General, General Re: [DELETED]

    Thanks^^

    Nov 28, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: 03. The Invisible Kid

    Got it^

    Nov 12, 2019
  • Other » Other, Dramatic Re: My world

    YWS tends to post reviews twice....

    Nov 1, 2019
  • Other » Other, Dramatic Re: My world

    What a beautiful world your world is.^^ I like the strong nature-related imagery you've used throughout the work. I especially like the second-to-last stanza, where you compare the coming and ...

    Nov 1, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Revolution

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    This is a really good poem. The "blood-spattered graffiti" and the "story of a people failed" lines really bring out the poor state of the "rebels." Indeed, blood stained artwork ...

    Oct 31, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Darkness Within!

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    Darkness within the speaker in this poem is being strangled by her own dreams and her unwillingness to see them through? That is a common problem among people nowadays (nods). ...

    Oct 31, 2019
  • Other » General, General Re: hell

    A powerful description of Hell.

    Oct 31, 2019
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Little Red Riding Hood

    The poor grandmother must be a nervous wreck by now...

    Oct 31, 2019
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Roses

    Is there a theme behind this work?

    Oct 29, 2019


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