AliceFairfield

This is a very emotional piece of writing. The speaker in this poem seems to be deeply in love with someone but cannot find the courage to openly express their ...

The horrific descriptions in this chapter made me feel scared as I read it, which is a good thing. Your writing evokes genuine feelings of fear. I could tell while ...

I am a newcomer to this story, but I can tell from this chapter that the male protagonist doesn't seem to understand humans and their world quite well. He also ...

I liked the pacing of the action in this chapter. I assumed from the contents of this chapter that the characters are supposed to defeat another kingdom's forces and protect ...

This chapter is very well-written and interesting enough to make me want to know what happens next. The way you write dialogue sounds natural in the setting that the characters ...

I thought this was out of the green room already...Well, no time like the present. I just spent a whole day using my brain, so pardon me if my review's ...

The last line is my favorite in this whole poem. The speaker seems to want to die quietly if the world does end soon. Either that, or they're convinced that ...

I haven't reviewed many scripts before, but since I know you're really good at your craft, I read this. Yikes, Esther sure is desperate for job connections...I'm glad she has ...

I've heard of minimalist poems, and I'm wondering if this is an example. You set this short poem as a romantic work. So am I correct to assume that the ...

This chapter definitely made me look forward to part two. Let me know when it comes out. I haven't read many retellings of fairytales, but this one is good, that ...

Cody is a surprisingly calm child if I've ever seen one...The new character Maria is already intriguing. Her eyes and behavior seem tough in a good way. So that watch ...

A glitch made my review get posted twice.

I like the insightfulness of this poem. Falling in love may be impossible for a meticulous person. It's too risky. The only two things I suggest is replacing the "jump" ...

So it was her mother...Or at least the memory of her mother Georgia still has in her head? The left and right brain personality concept is interesting. I liked how ...

This chapter was pretty short, so there's not much to criticize. The narrative is very well-organized and clear, and the physical descriptions you gave of the sisters were helpful. They ...