Alice

*Giggles* silly prok this was one of the most pointless peices of work I've ever seen. But it made me giggle and I liked it. It sounded like a four ...

Oh my God Koko! I looooooved this! It's pretty! I wouldn't be much help with the poetry part of it, just what you're saying. I loved it!

Heavier rock, and sadly no I don't know how to write music for rock stuff, and I'm afraid to approach those who do.

Massively edited!!!!

I like this song, it'd be cool to listen to. Its got a good message, and as far as I can tell, a good beat. Keep up the good work ...

ended! I don't have much else to say about it, so just PM me when the next part is posted okay?

*pats n00bs head* Don't worry you'll get it eventually.

Edited!

Why is this poem not in your blog? Or longer and more polite? Don't mean to be harsh or anything, but its better you hear it sooner or later.

I liked it, it was origional and interesting, and would probably go in with the music I listen to (Blue October mostly) but I did notice a few things wrong ...

You mean song dear? Its a song not a poem, I'm horrible at poetry.

Holy crap you made me cry! All I got, but that should be enough.

...And I feel so lucky to have you...

oh I thought this was all XD please just copy and paste it here, my computer'll injure me if I download anything more other than music.

I can sense that the father is slightly antagonistic, thats at least the vibe he gives off in the second part. Other than that little bit of the confusion about ...