Aley

So this poem has a nice concept, talk a bout your romantic interest as a paradise. I like how you go through and say all the things your paradise doesn't ...

This poem has some advantages to it. It is a poem that has the opportunity to really explore word use and sounds of words versus their meanings, but it can ...

Hello Team B, this is a member of team Amegsing! To start off I would like to say that the overall flow of the poem was good. It read well ...

Okay, please bear with me until the end of the review. First I want to get all of the nit-picky things out of the way then I'll tell you what ...

Hmm, Hello, I'm here to review~ So this poem is something between a really angry rant and a love letter. Reading it out loud, it's really easy to put emotion ...

To me this poem really seems to meander around what it wants to get at. At first, I felt like each section was about something different, either something deeper, or ...

So, I think the real thing that makes up for the lack of any discernible rhyme scheme in this poem is the internal rhyme. Your end rhyme pattern is absolutely ...

This is really funny once you get to dissecting the word choice. I had no idea what sesquipedalianists was, so I started looking things up. I knew pedal was foot, ...

So this is a perfect candidate for reductive poetry ^.- In other words, taking things out to improve the poem. I'd really love to go through this poem with you ...

So this is your most recent poem, and as your mentor I am reading it ^.- This is the first poem of yours I'm reading, so I may be off ...

This story is really tailored well to pull at the heart strings. It jumps right into the drama right at the beginning setting up exactly how this is going to ...

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This is kind of hard to follow. I mean, I love your writing style, and your syntax is great. I didn't really find any errors, but the story itself is ...

So, I'm not 100% sure why you wanted a review on this, whether it was because you wanted someone to give it to you straight, or because you wanted to ...

It usually got me know where so I had to find other ways. I was lucky enough to find some old books written on the old planet. It was mostly ...