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Aley

  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Children of the Phoenix (4)

    Heeey! Happy Review Day! I'm not going to comment on your overarching story cuz I don't know it, I'm a review day reviewer. What I will say is that I ...

    Mar 25, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Sea

    Hey PeijiRestoration, Aley here to review. First of all, I'd like to say thank you for posting your poem here! I know how scary that can be when you're still ...

    Mar 12, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Wrong Era Chapter 7

    Hey Moalex, I have to say I love how childish you've made the character. It feels authentic. Some of the word choices make it seem like she's older though because ...

    Jan 28, 2018
  • Other » Science, Spiritual Re: Atomic Entanglement, Love, and Gravity

    Hey LeviLowe, I have to say that although the actual questions you're asking sound rather deep and intense, like they really matter, I'm not really liking this story. The problem ...

    Jan 28, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Mage and the Immortal Chapter 16

    Hey Thundaguy, I'm here to help you get this through the Green Room with a review. That being said, I haven't read the rest of the book so I won't ...

    Jan 28, 2018
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Technology Re: Argumentative Essay (School Project! Reviews Needed!)

    Alright izanami, I've reviewed your paper. So, I'm going to preface this review with saying that I'm an English Major out of College. I have my BA so I've been ...

    Jan 28, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Kiss Me

    Hey Willard, I feel like your poem is really collecting a lot of attention because you've made it subliminally deep in some parts. The double meaning in this poem is ...

    Jan 3, 2018
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Science Fiction Re: Moluskian Maiden in Estrus approx 1000 words Flash Fiction

    Hey Radrook, I have to say that the flash fiction was entertaining if not a little predictable. I mean, it's clear to me that this situation is going to end ...

    Dec 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: The Kira Kira Poetry Club Collection #1

    I feel like I can't do half these poems justice by judging them all at once, so I'm going to be doing a long review and it's going to be ...

    Dec 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Origin

    Oh my, this is powerful. [why didn't I assign this to myself again?] I'm going to break this down into lists because I'm feeling listy rather than speechy. I might ...

    Nov 2, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: from the cave

    Hello Pompadour, This poem really reminds me of a kaleidoscope until we hit the part about the earth. To me, it really reads like it's a poem about learning how ...

    Oct 31, 2017
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: False Impressions

    Hey Alliyah, I really haven't read enough of your poetry. I feel like this one is a mix between figurative and metaphorical, but I have a hard time deciding if ...

    Oct 29, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: two reflections of my mind

    Hey Lizzy, I'm not really sure how to take this poem. Is it a commentary about perspective, or an old and a young person fighting, or two friends fighting? Some ...

    Oct 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: rotate

    Hey soundofmind, I think the turn in this is interesting. At the beginning of the poem I thought we were just talking about spinning in a computer chair, but after ...

    Oct 27, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Where I'm From (for class)

    Hey BA, I'm really happy to see you're home again. Welcome back. I think this is a really descriptive poem and I can visualize what you're talking about with the ...

    Oct 20, 2017


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