Hello Pompadour,
This poem really reminds me of a kaleidoscope until we hit the part about the earth. To me, it really reads like it's a poem about learning how to deal with how small and insignificant we are, but it starts out as a poem about what we see and how what we see might not be reality. I think both messages are strong, although having both messages in one poem does make it somewhat confusing.
I'm having a hard time actually reviewing this one because of other stuff going on, so I'm just going to keep this review short. Sorry PomPom.
What I remember about the theory of the cave is the question of what if what we perceive is not reality? What if our bodies are like cavemen watching shadows, and we only see the shadows of reality, which is behind us, out of what we can see. Our perception is how we view things in this world, but we might be viewing things poorly. We might be seeing the shadows rather than the actual things which cast them.
For me, this changes in the poem to a poem about perception of self in the universe when you begin to ask to see the sun for what it is, because what a sun really is, especially our sun, is just a burning ember amidst the vast array of gasses and smoke which combusts through pressure. We're just a spec compared to that little spark, and that seems so much more vast than talking about a shadow on a wall and our perception there.
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