Alexwriter

This was a beautiful poem and it really was relatable. Keep up all the good work :)

Hahaha this is cute :)

Thanks soo much for the tips and the support. I've now edited it as well as the other chapters and have completed a short fifth chapter which I will upload ...

It's a bit cliche but makes for a good mainstream pop song. I would've liked some emotional depth.

I absolutely LOVED this. Anything i had to critique was already mentioned by Jellybean. So all I can say is how much i enjoyed this. Keep up the good writing ...

I loved this poem. Not liked LOVED :D

I loved it. You judge yourself too harshly. It was beautifully written, emotional and powerful. Keep posting :)