Alexwriter

I really liked this. The enjambment was effective and it was really emotive. I loved the last stanza. It's really interesting however it's not consistent with the amount of lines ...

Chapter One I could see my breath when I exhaled. It was the white transparent color that always makes it seem as if an unknown life-force has just left your ...

Chapter 1 “FANG!” I SCREAMED, striving to save the love of my life. Just a little farther, Max…You can reach him, This should be in italics I lied to myself. ...

This summed love up really well. It was well-written and it paints a picture of the characters without the need for names or descriptions, which is something rare. I love ...

Parasite: The Corruptive Shadow Chapter 1: Unexpected Who’d have thought that this would happen to a guy like me? Who’d have thought that a knife would be pointed right at ...

I liked this poem. The way you wrote the dialogue seemed a little awkward and I think that%u2019s the charm of it, really. It captures the awkwardness of love (not ...

HAHAHA I thought I was in for a sombre poem but that last line had me laughing :) I could rant about the way it flowed etc but really it ...

I LOVED this series. However i thought it ended so happily and tidily that it was too different to the sombre atmosphere created for the entire series. I also thought ...

The best book I have read (recently at least) is The Book Thief. It's unusual for me because my genre is usually supernatural/paranormal/fantasy, but this was set in Nazi Germany ...

This is really well done for a first try. It's difficult to be confident in your work as a beginner. But i liked the flow of it and considering it's ...

I'm new so this is the first story I've looked at. However I would've liked to hear more details about the shambler. Since it's something completely original I would've liked ...