AlexandraD

This is an amazing short story, but I think you should attempt to go even further with it. Have you thought of expanding this piece into a novel? I know ...

Hey! I'd like to give a review of my own thoughts when reading this, but also one that builds on top of what the first review on your story said. ...

From reading this, I'm assuming it's only an excerpt from your story. I think this is a pretty strong start to what you're getting at, and it gives you a ...

First off, oh my god. This is an amazing poem. I love, love, LOVE, the use of repetition. I also really like the light ambiguity. From the way the writing ...

As you, I am fairly new to this website. I enjoyed this story, but I do have a few suggestions that may make it a bit better. At first, I ...